Rabu, 08 September 2010

English Rhyme Test 1

Ini lagi belajar-belajar nulis lirik rap berbahasa inggris. Semoga ada yang mau bantu menilai, memberi opini dan kritik yg membangun. Masih belajar saya :)



most major rap artist needs to be known as the hardest

regardless, the truth aint half like when they start this

they changed once the money is reaping for the harvest

from reality they're the farthest from where the spark is


a narcist, i know exactly what it feels like

unless its about me nothing really feels right

living in delusion, thought my career was real tight

i do my best to change but the past they still bite


and ignite a thought in my mind's basement

do i really deserve all the money and the payment

a self consciousness appeared that's what im facin'

ego replacement like face smacked to the pavement


it hurts like crazy when i finally faced me

in the mirror, reflection really amazed me

once the stage mist was gone now wait, see

the aspiring artist is gone, now who this face be?


3 komentar:

AjupNdha mengatakan...

boleh juga bang .
gue juga mau blajar bikin lirik pake bhsa inggris .
tp otaknye ga nyampe .
ehehehehe ..
keren bang .

a.k.a FML ajup emce

Ezio mengatakan...

kata2nya sarkasme om igor hehe

chu nurz kenji mengatakan...

ok shippp abizzz